User talk:Kellymichael/Permanent Vacation (2007) (film)

Comments by WikiDan61
I saw your request for comments from and thought I'd throw in my 2¢ worth.

The page title should be "Permanent Vacation (2007 film)" not "Permanent Vacation (2007)(film)" I took care of this in the header section, was hoping that conveyed it. &mdash; Timneu22 · &#32; talk 13:52, 2 June 2010 (UTC) Film and book titles are always italicized, so the first words of the artcile should be "Permanent Vacation is...". All other references to the film's title should read Permanent Vacation. The novel on which the film was based is What We Did on Our Holidays.
 * Title
 * Formatting

The cast should be listed simply as the actor's name (Wikilinked as you have done) and the name of the role. Other films that the actor has appeared in are not required, as the Wikilink will lead the interested reader to the full article about the actor.
 * Cast

This section requires more references. The use of the pronoun "we" in the middle of one of the sentences informs me that you may have been a part of this production. Your personal recollections of the production do not make for verifiable encyclopedia content. Unless the production details were documented in a news story, magazine article, or other such reliable source, they really don't belong in the article.
 * Production

Every award must be verified with a citation to a reliable source. For awards, the award's website listing the film as the winner of the award would suffice. Links must be formatted with the http:// prefix, or they will not create a clickable link. The syntax is as follows:
 * Awards and festivals
 * External links
 * Official Website produces Official Website
 * produces &mdash; Timneu22 · &#32; talk 16:54, 2 June 2010 (UTC)

Other than these comments, you seem to have the beginnings of a fine article. The notability of the cast and crew are sufficient to confer notability to the film, in my opinion. WikiDan61 ChatMe!ReadMe!! 13:49, 2 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Conclusion

Crossed everything off the list, but we need some categories. You can do that after posting.
 * Categories