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Ip Man (film)GA Review

 * This is a copy of the Ip Man (film) GA Review and this is used as a personal check-list the official page can be seen here Talk:Ip_Man_(film)

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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 02:58, 9 August 2013 (UTC)

My first film (GA) review will come soon. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 02:58, 9 August 2013 (UTC)

Prior review
I first wanted to address the fact that it seems every concern outlined in the previous review has been allayed, most notably the extensive reference restructuring. Now, onto the present state of the article...✅

Lead and infobox
Both are informative, and summarize the article suitably.✅

Plot and Cast
As I said earlier, this is my first cinematic GA review. Thus, I have learned that plots don't need references. However, it seems on every GA-level film article, there are references within the casting section. You will need to adduce this section as such. One all-encompassing reference might work, or you could reference each individual cast member.✅

Production

 * I will need references for each crew member mentioned in the first two paragraphs, just as in the casting section.✅
 * "However, the studio producing the film closed, and the project was abandoned." What studio was this?✅
 * "Apart from historical references, Mak also created a glass house in the factory." What does this mean exactly? I would assume that this glass factory was used in the creation of props? Or otherwise?✅
 * You mention Hung's praise in the last paragraph. Could you adduce it?✅

Film title controversy
Interesting trivia.

Release
I have altered the ebb and flow of the Box Office subsection.✅

Accolades and Sequels
Both pass.✅

Conclusion
I am exulted I will be able to pass my first cinematic GA review, once these few issues are mitigated. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 22:08, 15 August 2013 (UTC)

Extra things to do

Broken Links
There are numerous broken link check http://toolserver.org/~dispenser/cgi-bin/webchecklinks.py/Ip_Man_(film). Thanks Kelvin 101 (talk) 18:25, 17 August 2013 (UTC) ✅

Awards
There are some awards listed on IMDB that are not in the article's award section for list see here http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1220719/awards?ref_=tt_ql_4 Thanks Kelvin 101 (talk) 20:55, 17 August 2013 (UTC)✅