User talk:Kemiomocele

July 2024
Hello, I'm Abasteraster. Wikipedia is written by people who have a wide diversity of opinions, but we try hard to make sure articles have a neutral point of view. Your recent edit to Celestial Church of Christ seemed less than neutral and has been removed. If you think this was a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. Abasteraster (talk) 06:23, 5 July 2024 (UTC)


 * hi. I made more than 1 edit, can you be specific about the ones you feel are not neutral and let me know why you think they are not neutral 41.76.192.13 (talk) 07:24, 5 July 2024 (UTC)
 * Sure. Specifically, I believe that replacing "Pentecostal church in the Aladura movement" in the first sentence with "spiritual, Jesus-believing church" implies that the church is somehow more spiritual and faithful than other denominations. Also, it removes the information on the church's denomination. The other stuff about the church expanding into other countries looks perfectly neutral to me, but as with all additions to Wikipedia, you should cite a reliable source so that readers and other editors can verify that what you're saying is true. You can find a helpful guide on how to cite sources at Citing sources.
 * One last thing- adding "Bilewu" to " Samuel Bilewu Oshoffa " breaks the link to the article for Samuel Oshoffa. If you would like it to include his middle name you need to pipe the link like so: Samuel Bilewu Oshoffa . Here is how that will look in the article: Samuel Bilewu Oshoffa. I reverted this change too, but I wouldn't be opposed to you changing it back as long as the link still works. You can read more about how to link things on Wikipedia (and how to avoid breaking them) at Manual of Style/Linking.
 * Thanks and have a good day! Abasteraster (talk) 07:42, 5 July 2024 (UTC)