User talk:Kennjones/sandbox

I have started to look at the content gap for Stalin's information. He had many books published and "The Foundations of Leninism" was one of them. It is posted as "The Principles of Leninism on the wikipedia page for Tehran Conference, however it is incorrect information. I will make sure to obtain the correct information. I am also using the other book references to see exactly what information they took from the books to use within the references. I hope this will be enough information to be successful in showing his work. Missi1705 (talk) 16:29, 2 April 2018 (UTC)

Review
Comparing the originals to the edited versions, such as the Dinner Meeting, you have added some valuable information. Though your last two, Assassination and three powers, has great sourcing and is well planned out. I greatly enjoyed seeing the comparison of the "Decision" from the original to the expanded version you had created. Your group is doing a fantastic job!Carr63 (talk) 23:56, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Hey thanks for the feedback! It's always nice to hear encouraging comments:) --Simonekjo (talk) 02:43, 16 April 2018 (UTC)

Tyler's Peer Review
I think this is a great article so far. This isn't really a review, but under General Notes the "(can't believe I just did that)" I can totally relate to. Under the article Alleged Assassination I would suggest linking NKVD. And the following section The Declaration of the Three Powers, I would suggest shortening the title and doing subtitles. As a reader I want short concise titles, but that's just me. I think the information in this article is informative, and I like the links you've added, as it gives the reader an opportunity to gain more knowledge of the linked words. Trhill (talk) 00:10, 9 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Thanks for suggesting linking to NKVD. I totally forgot to go back and add links! Simonekjo (talk)  —Preceding undated comment added 06:06, 11 April 2018 (UTC)


 * I do agree that The Three Powers section would look better with subtitles. I will change that for the final draft. I did not think about how long the title was when I did the first draft. Thank you.Missi1705 (talk) 14:32, 12 April 2018 (UTC)

Melissa's Edit

 * I decided to go ahead and make the changes to my portion of the article. I hope this is better to understand than the title that I had before. Thank you again for the feedback and I hope this helps my group members as well. Missi1705 (talk) 22:04, 15 April 2018 (UTC)