User talk:KennyMcLean22/sandbox

Article Evaluation:

I found the article to be quite fascinating and useful. I personally did not think the article was done poorly in any way, until I visited the talk section and saw numerous rants regarding the material. There wasn't too many complaints, but two separate people complained about the first paragraph specifically, and I didn't see much of a reason to argue. The only thing I butted in on was a comment someone made in the talk section involving heteronormativity and transgender people being linked in the same conversation. I disagreed with the person who wrote that there should be more information regarding transgender people, because I believe that transgender is its own conversation alone. Heteronormativity focuses more on the thoughts against homosexuality, and transgender is deeper into the conversation than heteronormativity presents in itself. Other than that I thought the article was very useful and did not have too many mistakes.