User talk:KennyTharp/Players (magazine)/Kailynhill721 Peer Review

Lead: Though clear and concise, the lead does not overview the content later discussed in the article. Content: I think the content is missing information, in particular, I think it would be important to discuss how and why the magazine's shift in content (ie. removing its original political, artistic, and historical themes) reflects the dominant images projected onto Black men. The article references A Taste for Brown Sugar but I think it should include some information about what Young says about the magazine specifically. I think that the media representation section is too general. It leaves me wondering what the negative images this magazine portrays about Black men are.