User talk:Kenren01/Evaluate an Article

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Something that seems a bit strange to me about this article is that the lead has a lot of information about her health issues, but actually very little biographical information, or information about her style and significance as a mangaka. Does she write about her health? Why is it so important for us to know she had a hysterectomy? If we're getting that level of detail in this one area, it would be nice to see more general information about this artist. Ctextor at uofu (talk) 11:37, 25 September 2019 (UTC)