User talk:Kensu.bates/Earshot Jazz

Hi Kensu,

I just got done reviewing your article and thought you did a great job. With minor changes, this article will definitely reach a higher rating. Here is the link to my peer review https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kensu.bates/Earshot_Jazz/Chrisuw_Peer_Review.

Keep up the good work!

Chrisuw (talk) 21:27, 31 January 2020 (UTC)

peer reveiw
Hi I just reviewed your article on Earshot Jazz. Well done! Here is the link:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kensu.bates/Earshot_Jazz/S1tongYang_Peer_Review. S1tongYang (talk) 23:16, 31 January 2020 (UTC)

Pre-move Review
Hello, I looked over your change history and see that you've done quite a bit to improve the article!

When ready, you can Begin moving your work to Wikipedia! Please review the detailed explanation of the process on our class wiki.

While you are good to go, here are a few suggestions that will really make your additions shine:


 * Use the short description template for your paragraph above the Table of Contents. Remember that this is the first thing anyone will read on the page, starting a paragraph with "Also" is probably not recommended.
 * Consider adding/moving around some headers/sections. For instance, "History" is often used.
 * Try to find an infobox that is relevant, for instance WikiProject Festivals/Templates.
 * Try to find any relevant category templates. Also, try to link to the relevant WikiProject.
 * Add a "See also" section of related articles.
 * Clean up the formatting a bit, I see some missing periods, for instance the last sentence in the "Earshot Jazz Magazines" section.
 * Review the WikiEdu Editing Guide and see if anything else stands out.

Please let me know if you have any questions. Thank you for becoming a Wikipedia contributor! 一 Salt ♨️🚲🧂🧙‍♂️🐧🎓⚔️☠️ (talk) 07:28, 12 February 2020 (UTC)