User talk:Kent Westlund

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Speedy deletion nomination of LuLaRoe


A tag has been placed on LuLaRoe, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, product, group, service or person and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and FAQ/Organizations for more information.

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I can't find the "Contest this speedy deletion" button. But I don't believe this article meets speedy deletion criteria. Did a human read the article, or was it flagged by a bot? If it was unambiguous advertising that only promotes a company, it wouldn't include a large section titled Criticism, listing a half-dozen negative aspects of the company. I have no affiliation with this company, and no reason to advertise it. The reason I created this article was because it is receiving extensive media coverage, yet when I came to Wikipedia to find out what the company is about, I found that it had no wikipedia entry at all. The article was written in good faith, and took some effort to construct, as you can imagine. Kent Westlund (talk) 02:42, 17 January 2017 (UTC)
 * Thanks for reaching out. The speedy deletion button is no longer available because a patrolling admin has already deleted the article from the article mainspace. I reviewed the article, after which admin BU Rob13 deleted the article per G11 (unambiguous advertising or promotion). From my recollection, the criticisms seemed to overlook any real problems with the company, one of the problems being "explosive growth." Also, the tone of the article was fairly promotional. Further, can you please point out how the company meets Wikipedia's company notability guidelines at Notability (organizations and companies)? --JustBerry (talk) 03:15, 17 January 2017 (UTC)

The subject company is notable; reliable sources independent of the organization have discussed it... my article linked to several articles in major publications... http://www.forbes.com/sites/marciaturner/2016/10/18/lularoes-secret-to-becoming-a-direct-sales-powerhouse-facebook-live/ Kent Westlund (talk) 03:22, 17 January 2017 (UTC)

It's very discouraging to spend an afternoon working on a contribution, only for it to be deleted near-instantly and without any discussion.Kent Westlund (talk) 03:26, 17 January 2017 (UTC)

Related to the company's growth, the article mentioned overloaded IT systems and delays receiving inventory. I don't think anyone would read that as a compliment. Kent Westlund (talk) 03:31, 17 January 2017 (UTC)

The article also mentioned comparisons of the firm’s business model to that of a pyramid scheme. Doesn't seem like unambiguous advertising. Kent Westlund (talk) 03:35, 17 January 2017 (UTC)


 * The small criticism section stated such things as fact like "incredible growth" contributed to delays getting inventory and that the company does not meet the definition of the pyramid scheme. It was largely unsourced and included very promotional language throughout. The criticisms section appeared to be an afterthought and written/placed in such a way that it was not at all negative toward the company. It appeared to be there only to make the argument that the article wasn't promotional, even though the entirely unsourced body of the article was filled with overtly promotional language. ~ Rob 13 Talk 03:41, 17 January 2017 (UTC)

The criticisms mentioned were: 1) Pyramid Scheme Comparisons, 2) High Minimum Investment 3) Lack of Financial of Transparency 4) Growing Pains (leading to overloaded IT and shipping delays), 5) Inconsistent Product Sizing, 6) Variable Product Quality. I was careful not to call the firm a pyramid scheme, because it has the same business structure as Amway and other MLM firms.Kent Westlund (talk) 03:55, 17 January 2017 (UTC)

To be honest, while I was writing the article I was concerned that I was being too hard on the company and was spending too much time on the various criticisms. In any case, if the article read a bit too positive, shouldn't the article have been flagged as such, rather than being deleted without a trace? I can understand why a Speedy Deletion feature is needed, but surely this isn't the kind of issue it is intended for? Kent Westlund (talk) 04:05, 17 January 2017 (UTC)

My article didn't actually say "incredible growth"... it said "LuLaRoe’s explosive growth in 2015 and 2016 lead to the company struggling to keep up with demand. New and existing consultants have reported difficulty with overloaded IT systems and delays receiving inventory." Forbes magazine said: "The near-startup is on track to hit $1 billion in sales this year – yes, that’s billion with a “b” – and has been growing at an average rate of 25% per month for the last 24 months..." My article was more restrained than Forbes, I think. Kent Westlund (talk) 04:12, 17 January 2017 (UTC)


 * Before this discussion continues, perhaps it would be well to remind you about our Terms of Use, particularly with respect to  paid contributions without disclosure .  this are considerable more exact rules than when you first joined WP, so you should review them  DGG ( talk ) 07:36, 17 January 2017 (UTC)

The FAQ on disclosure of paid contributions is interesting, but it doesn't apply in this situation because I am an unpaid volunteer, and entirely unaffiliated with the subject company. I infer from your message that my contribution was vaporized because it was incorrectly flagged as a paid edit. Kent Westlund (talk) 14:27, 17 January 2017 (UTC)

So where do I go from here? I feel like half a day of my effort has been flushed, because my work was mistakely assumed to be a paid article. Isn't there supposed to be an assumption of good faith? Kent Westlund (talk) 16:19, 17 January 2017 (UTC)


 * Are you really asking us to believe that purely as a volunteer, with no connection to the company, you wrote an article on the firm that included the sentence "LuLaRoe’s fashion consultants now total about 35,000, with thousands more waiting to join the team."? This is pure advertising. If you did it as a volunteer, you nonetheless created advertising for them. The article was deleted as advertising,and would have been  deleted as such, regardless of who wrote it.   DGG ( talk ) 23:44, 17 January 2017 (UTC)

I am a volunteer with no connection to the company. Back in October, a Forbes magazine article said: "To-date, the company has signed up more than 24,000 fashion consultants and an additional 16,000-18,000 are waiting to be added to the team". Pure advertising? Or a relevant factual statement? http://www.forbes.com/sites/marciaturner/2016/10/18/lularoes-secret-to-becoming-a-direct-sales-powerhouse-facebook-live/  Kent Westlund (talk) 23:59, 17 January 2017 (UTC)

If I was a shill for the company, would my article have included the sentence: "Some customers have found LuLaRoe clothing to be disappointing in terms of workmanship; reporting prints that do not line up across seams, thin fabric, tiny holes, and otherwise defective materials." ? Kent Westlund (talk) 00:29, 18 January 2017 (UTC)


 * Kent, I've restored the article (or am about to, rather) to Draft:LuLaRoe. You will need to extensively provide sourcing for all claims and remove the plainly promotional language throughout the majority of the article before moving it to the mainspace. At this point, its current form is still eligible for deletion under WP:G11, and if substantial changes are not made to it, I or another admin may re-delete it after a reasonable period of time. ~ Rob 13 Talk 01:39, 18 January 2017 (UTC)

Ok thanks Rob; I will make the changes you have suggested. Kent Westlund (talk) 01:49, 18 January 2017 (UTC)

"Marcia Layton Turner,  CONTRIBUTOR.   Opinions expressed by Forbes Contributors are their own." this is an advertorial, and best seen as the perversion of honest journalism--because just as you did, most readers will not pay attention to the disclaimer--even though Forbes put it right at the top, or if they do notice it, will not understand its significance. There is similar content in many otherwise reliable sources--most notably perhaps in the Huffington Post, which we no longer recognize as a reliable source for Biographies.  DGG ( talk ) 05:18, 19 January 2017 (UTC)
 * Kent, that articles was published as part of Forbes, but they do not claim editorial responsibility for it:

If that Forbes article is just a paid advertisement then I was taken in. It does seem to be on the gushy side. Kent Westlund (talk) 05:34, 19 January 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: LuLaRoe (January 21)
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SwisterTwister  talk  23:58, 21 January 2017 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:LuLaRoe has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:LuLaRoe. Thanks! SwisterTwister  talk  00:14, 22 January 2017 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:LuLaRoe has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:LuLaRoe. Thanks! SwisterTwister  talk  00:45, 22 January 2017 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:LuLaRoe has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:LuLaRoe. Thanks! SwisterTwister  talk  00:59, 22 January 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: LuLaRoe (January 22)
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Ⓩⓟⓟⓘⓧ Talk 03:29, 22 January 2017 (UTC)

Regarding [Draft:LuLaRoe]]:

Per SwisterTwister's advice, I've removed the following references that came from regional newspapers: - The Daily Express - The Indianapolis Star - The Times Leader - The Democrat and Chronicle - The Times Herald

I've retained the references from major independent news publications: - Forbes Magazine - The Boston Globe - Business Insider

I've retained the references that highlighted controversies: - Consumer Reports - Pacific Standard - Saving Advice - Racked

I've removed these two reference that don't mention LuLaRoe by name: - USA Today - Federal Trade Commission

I've removed this reference that SwisterTwister called a blog: - Yahoo Style

Kent Westlund (talk) 17:55, 22 January 2017 (UTC)
 * Pinging addressee. --JustBerry (talk) 18:00, 22 January 2017 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:LuLaRoe has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:LuLaRoe. Thanks! SwisterTwister  talk  18:12, 22 January 2017 (UTC)

To be clear, you're saying that I need to delete the sections "History: Founding", "Products", "Business Model" and "Sales Methods"? Essentially everything other than the introduction and the list of criticisms?

I'm confused, because the Wikipedia entries for analogous firms e.g. Amway include long sections "History: Founding", "Brands", "Business Model" etc.

Kent Westlund (talk) 18:45, 22 January 2017 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:LuLaRoe has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:LuLaRoe. Thanks! SwisterTwister  talk  05:45, 29 January 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: LuLaRoe (March 9)
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Dr Strauss  talk  13:25, 9 March 2017 (UTC)

forbes.com/sites is not a reliable source for facts
Do not keep adding citations to https://www.forbes.com/sites/ to Draft:LuLaRoe. It is not what you think or claim it is. It is not Forbes Magazine. The sites written by contributors rather than Forbes staff are click-bait blogs with no editorial oversight to speak of. They are not reliable sources for facts. --Worldbruce (talk) 05:08, 24 April 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: LuLaRoe (April 27)
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Yashovardhan (talk) 18:31, 27 April 2017 (UTC)

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