User talk:KerenLerner

July 2008
Welcome to Wikipedia. Although everyone is welcome to make constructive contributions to Wikipedia, at least one of your recent edits, such as the one you made to Rae hoffenberg, did not appear to be constructive and has been automatically reverted by ClueBot. Please use the sandbox for any test edits you would like to make, and take a look at the welcome page to learn more about contributing to this encyclopedia. If you believe there has been a mistake and would like to report a false positive, please report it here and then remove this warning from your talk page. If your edit was not vandalism, please feel free to make your edit again after reporting it. The following is the log entry regarding this warning: Rae hoffenberg was changed by KerenLerner (u) (t) redirecting article to non-existant page on 2008-07-08T10:40:52+00:00. Thank you. ClueBot (talk) 10:40, 8 July 2008 (UTC)

Welcome
Welcome to Wikipedia. To find out how to make useful contributions, take a look at the welcome page. To stay in Wikipedia, an article has to be about something notable, that is, of general interest. Click on Notability for an explanation of what that means, and on Notability (people) for more detail. Also, it must give independently verifiable sources and must be written from a neutral point of view, and not in a promotional manner. Articles that don't meet these requirements are likely to be deleted. Follow the links below to learn more: JohnCD (talk) 16:09, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
 * To find out more about creating articles, read the Introduction and the guide to creating Your first article.
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Rae Hoffenberg
Please do not remove the template from the article until the issues it raises have been addressed, by you or by other editors. Its presence may cause other editors to come and help to make the article more encyclopedic in tone. To understand the problem with the present version, please read the style guideline Avoid peacock terms and the policy on Neutral point of view.

As examples of biographies written in a more encyclopedic tone, you could look at the articles on Richard Rogers or Norman Foster, or pick any biographical articles out of the lists of Featured articles or Good articles.

Other guidelines you may find helpful are Your first article, Starting an article, Writing better articles, Article development, and the Manual of Style (biographies).

Regards, JohnCD (talk) 16:09, 8 July 2008 (UTC)