User talk:Kerenam/sandbox

The article you've chosen, I believe, is definitely deserving of editing. Specifically, there are sections which are severely lacking information. If you lost or overwhelmed concerning where to start, I would focus on one section or subsection. Finding research papers becomes easier when you focus more. Since you don't have much information on you sandbox at the moment, I can't give much more substantial feedback other than if you'd like me to look at it again, I totally would. Just let me know, and good luck, you're going to knock this one out of the park. Scoy16 (talk) 13:22, 17 March 2018 (UTC)