User talk:Kerrybeth6

Your submission at Articles for creation
 You recently made a submission to Articles for Creation. Your article has been reviewed and because some issues were found, it could not be accepted in its current form; it is now located at Wikipedia&. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. Feel free to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved. (You can do this by adding the text to the top of the article.) Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Topher385 (talk) 02:22, 23 August 2011 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 You recently made a submission to Articles for Creation. Your article has been reviewed and because some issues were found, it could not be accepted in its current form; it is now located at Wikipedia&. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. Feel free to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved. (You can do this by adding the text to the top of the article.) Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia!  Kudu ~I/O~ 02:32, 24 August 2011 (UTC)

Iris Bohnet
Hello Kerrybeth6,

Regarding your submission at Articles for Creation:

While the subject might meet one of the notability criteria for academics, it still needs some more references independent of the subject. That means (as quoted from WP:GNG: "'Independent of the subject' excludes works produced by those affiliated with the subject or its creator. For example, self-publicity, advertising, self-published material by the subject, the subject's website, autobiographies, and press releases are not considered independent."

The article also needs cleanup; I'll help you with that. Thanks, Samwb123T-C-E 19:11, 24 August 2011 (UTC)