User talk:Kerryjotto

Chicago edits
You seem to have some stake in your recent edits to Chicago, which is ok, but you should consider a few things while you edit. First off, don't use first person like "we". This is an encyclopedia so everything is in third person. Second you need to source what you write. Simply listing a link to the front of some web site without the actual pertinent section doesn't help anyone. Third, don't link to a website when a wikilink works better. Children's Memorial Hospital already has an article so there is no reason to link to their website (in fact according to your contributions page you have edited there also). Finally, since you do appear to have an interest in the subject of your edits, remember to keep a nuetral point of view, Wikipedia is not free advertisement. Hope this info helps, if you need any advice about editing feel free to message my talk page. Zombie Hunter Smurf (talk) 20:47, 18 September 2008 (UTC)