User talk:KevinHowe12/sandbox

Peer Review
I really enjoyed your article. I liked how you were able to link other wikipedia articles within your article. I think you should add a little more context in your lead section, but I think your article is very well structured. I was able to follow the information of Angela Murray Gibson clearly within the different sections. I noticed two spelling errors- In the Early Life section- merchandising and in the Career section you forgot the t in the in the fourth to last sentence. Your article was very well-written and I think you did a great job! Jennafaherty (talk) 19:08, 30 November 2014 (UTC)

Edited article
Article is researched really well! Good use of different sections to make it clear to read and navigate. I went in a edited minor parts like grammar and spelling, and also linked one of your terms in the article. May want to consider taking a look at it and choosing one pronoun to use consistently throughout the article. Be mindful of repeating yourself, but otherwise great job! Fmanzon (talk) 15:43, 1 December 2014 (UTC)