User talk:Kevpinder/sandbox

Kiera's Peer Review
Hello Kevin! Here are my comments about your article:

1. Lead section: The first part of the sentence looks great to me, but the last part is a little bit confusing. Did you mean that the winds blow from the center out (from high pressure to low pressure)? "...,where winds around the storm flow in the direction opposite to that of the flow above a region of low pressure." I don't know what does "that" mean? I think it will be super clear if you can use specific word to replace "that"!! And after reading the whole article, it think your lead section is a good lead/definition for anticyclonic storm with a different word for "that".

2. Structure: Your structure currently is quite clear. Having examples in this is so cool~ and it helps to grasp the idea of the article. I also think that your can make the article a little longer by dividing the Description section into smaller sections, such as anticyclonic storms, anticyclonic tornadoes, even talking a bit about Coriolis effect because that what makes the storms move in opposite directions in North and South Hemisphere (this might be a bit out of topic though), Hail-producing mesoanticyclonic storms, etc.

3. Balanced coverage: I think the length is good, but it can be longer with more explanation for the anticyclonic storms, like how do they form, what are the conditions, how long they will last, and why there are differences between the North and the South Hemisphere while anticyclonic does not contradict the Coriolis Effect? These are the questions that popped up while reading your article. Besides, all the sections are related, and nothing is off-topic.

4. Neutral content: The article is written in a neutral point of view, no bias was showed. :'>

5. Reliable sources: As I am looking into both your sandbox and the article page, it seems like the article page has clearer sources, but the format is not as good as your sandbox. The sources are repeated with no directed link to review. And it would be good to have the site fore the third paragraph in the Description section as well.

Lastly, thank you very much for your hard work! I studied this in Oceanography class, and it was really confusing in all aspects. I hope that my comments would be helpful! Ntran75 (talk) 23:21, 9 April 2021 (UTC)