User talk:Kexin Sheng/Xiamen Special Economic Zone

Feedback on draft
Hi @Kexin Sheng, @Chinhy, @Shuang Wen, @SamKomo, @Jinhe6666:

I took a look at your draft, and have some feedback to improve your work for mainspace.

Headers: The headers, "Opening up and Reform period" and "Xiamen before opening up and reform" aren't that informative to a reader that doesn't know much about this topic. I suggest changing the title to reflect the information in the section better like is it background info, is it historical context?

Opening up and Reform period: This section is a giant blob of text. Is there a way to better to break that up and organize it so it's easier to read?

Current leading industries: I suggest a more informative title bc 'current' is subjective to when the reader will reads the article. I'd take out the word current.

Inline citations blurb: I've added citation needed tags to the article where needed. I think you all should go back and add more inline citations. Every statement should be followed by a supporting citation; if a group of sentences are all supported by the same source, you can place a single reference after all of them, but you need to have at least one reference per paragraph, and you shouldn't have any statements after the final reference in a paragraph.

Punctuation: Reminder punctuation goes before inline citations, not after. Lots of edits to make regarding this.

Once you've improved your draft, since it is a group effort, I recommend each editor add their text contribution to the existing Xiamen Special Economic Zone article, so that each editor receives proper credit for their work. Remember to copy over work in small chunks. Look over the training modules on adding to an existing article for a refresher on the steps to do this correctly.

Feel free to reach out if you have any questions on my feedback or about editing. Well done! Brianda (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:59, 5 May 2023 (UTC)