User talk:Kfelder2/sandbox

The overall contribution was great. The article was informative and a very enjoyable read. Your contribution was very knowledgeable and broke down the subject in a very reader friendly way. When mentioning the jail time, you could possibly the sentence they could possibly face for the crime. In the beginning, go more into detail about what neoliberal governance is. Throughout the article,be aware to check for grammatical errors. Look throughout the article, and search for anything you can elaborate on. Maybe you can talk about the difference between regular panhandling and excessive panhandling. Other than those few critiques, the overall contribution was amazing. The article is an interesting topic and something I believe will keep all readers engaged.

ZuriShaw (talk) 04:58, 2 November 2018 (UTC)Zuri Shaw