User talk:Kfill/sandbox

Article Evaluation This article is very short and ideas could be expanded upon. There are only two references and I think the content that is on the page could be explained better if more thought out. It looks rushed.

I feel as though for "politics in education," there could be a section about challenges of discussing this topic in education.

I believe the term 'micropolitics' could have a link to a wiki page that defines this term.

Peer Review
Looking through your edits to the Popular Opinion in the United States on the Invasion of Iraq, I have noticed that you made substanial edits on the page. You have done so by creating a timeline of a series of events from start to finish of when we orginally invaded until now. You worked off the intial report that 64% of Americans didn't not agree with the invasion of Iraq. Which did not last once Obama came into office and decided to remove the troops from the middle east by 2011. This decision was highly agreed upon by 78% of Americans. 52% also thought that we never really acheived anything in Iraq. Your sources such as the Pew Research Center and the CQ Researcher are very accurate and reliable. This article in general is a good way to show the shift of public opinion within America that can occur through a gradual shift especially once people understand the facts and see things not going the way they originally assummed. Lost lives and an ill-informed government caused the American people to go to war and when realizing too much money and bloodshed was not worth it anymore, they wanted to pull out, which unfortunately is now being reversed by President Trump. This article could still use some improvement by including the most recent news and thoughts about what is going on now. However, in general good job!

Joey9201 (talk) 17:15, 25 October 2018 (UTC)Joe El-Sharnouby

Peer Review
Something you may want to look at is the comparison of public opinion and approval ratings of Obama vs. Bush during the different invasions they lead during their presidencies. Bush had an all time high approval rating after 9/11 and this is vastly different from the approval rating of Obama during his conflict times in office. The other information you are planning to in looks good and will help the article.Carsonfirestone (talk) 18:09, 26 October 2018 (UTC)