User talk:Kflynn12/sandbox

Katie, I'm not clear how this contribution is related to the research paper. Also, if you're going to write about Wethersfield, I wonder if there aren't articles or publications on the history of the city. Or the economy. Cassell04 (talk) 01:31, 11 March 2019 (UTC)

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Your contribution is very focused on statistics which is good because it helps keep it unbiased but it is not as easy to read or understand, therefore I would suggest expanding more into what the stats mean in the future. Your foundational information and sources are very good though. Dominick BattistoneDbattis3 (talk) 03:02, 11 March 2019 (UTC)

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I like that the statistics are the main focus of the article. This allows someone who is searching for information on the city to get an idea of the racial makeup, income levels, and ages in the city. However, there does not seem to be much about the history or culture of the location, which is something that I see in other location articles. I also believe that there could be more sources added, but this is a good start to an article. Drew Taylor Dtaylo78 (talk) 03:09, 14 March 2019 (UTC)