User talk:Kfriston

Your submission at Articles for creation
 The free energy principle, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as B-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Jamesx12345 (talk) 09:57, 29 May 2013 (UTC)
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copy-editing
Please notice my edits to Free energy principle, and notice that WP:MOS exists. In particular:
 * I dropped the definite article from the title;
 * Page ranges require en-dashes, not hyphens.

In another of your articles I found numerous instances of things like
 * \dot

where it would have been enough to write
 * \dot{\tilde{x}}

and things like
 * + {u}'' +

instead of
 * + u' +

This multiple nesting of needless braces is clutter and serves no purpose, and makes things more complicated for others who edit the article later. Michael Hardy (talk) 07:40, 24 June 2013 (UTC)