User talk:Kgt11/Atypical Anorexia/Jvagadori Peer Review

Hi Kate, Grace and Velen,

First off, fantastic job! I think your article reflects all the research and hard work you've put into this project. A couple of suggestions for your article: to start, I would change the "History of the Diagnosis" to its own subtitle because right now I believe it is a header. In this way, you can differentiate it from the lead. Secondly, I would add a citation that substantiates the claim you make at the beginning of your "Signs and Symptoms" section (where you state that patients do not deem themselves "sick enough"). Thirdly, I think it might be interesting to expand on some of the signs and symptoms that are most prevalent in self-reported or diagnosed individuals with atypical anorexia. I'd be curious to see if there are articles and scholarly journals that delineate the symptomatology in more detail. Maybe pulling out two or three that are most common (and this would require additional research to see what symptoms predominate in patients) could be really interesting! I also think it could be prudent to expand on the intersection of insurance and atypical anorexia, specifically through the lens of access to care for afflicted individuals. Overall, I thought this was a really solid draft- great job!