User talk:Khad333/sandbox

Hi, I found your article informative because bullying is very common and a vast majority of people have experienced it or know someone who has experienced bullying. Including tips and information to prevent and dealing with bullying would be excellent in your piece of writing http://www.becomeahairdresser.net/ http://www.kidshelpphone.ca/Teens/InfoBooth/Bullying.aspx --Claudine.Sabat (talk) 19:43, 4 November 2014 (UTC)

Hey there, you have written a great Wikipedia article that is very informative. I believe an article like this is needed because cyber-bullying and bullying itself is a major problem in our society. In addition to this there have been some very extreme cases which display that cyber-bullying is on the rise. If you are interested, here are some sites that you might be interested in to help improve it: http://mashable.com/2014/07/13/cyberbullying-stalking-leander-texas/ http://www.canada.com/life/Cyber+bullying+rise/2915031/story.html --Marinaawadalla (talk) 06:43, 10 November 2014 (UTC)

Hello, you've written a wonderful article. However you focused more on the effects, and left out preventive measures. I have attached two links, one being an OPP tip sheet on their advice towards handling cyberbullying, and an advice sheet on the differing laws throughout Canada by province on cyberbullying. http://www.opp.ca/ecms/files/250363910.6.pdf http://mediasmarts.ca/backgrounder/cyberbullying-law-fact-sheet --ChrisJenkins-100460518 (talk) 16:41, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

Interesting article. Here are some additional resources that looks at the different approaches to cyberbullying by males and females, as well as an article about the bystander behaviour that help to reinforce the bully: http://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/10.1002/ab.21555/full www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S074756321300386 --Amyterminesi (talk) 16:58, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

Great job! Your Wikipedia page is well written and contains a lot of useful knowledge. If you wish to expand your page in the future I suggest to add topics such as legislation against cyber bullying and also growing awareness. Some websites you may find useful are : http://thechronicleherald.ca/novascotia/1243035-controversial-cyberbullying-bill-goes-to-vote-with-no-changes,http://mediasmarts.ca/digital-media-literacy/digital-issues/cyberbullying — Preceding unsigned comment added by Fatimahmulani (talk • contribs) 17:01, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

Hello, your article was very interesting. Some ways you can expand your article are talking about this newspaper article on the case of Rehtaeh Parsons, in relation to cyber bullying. This article talks about the new law that came into place in Nova Scotia when they introduced the Cyber-Safety Act. http://www.telegraph.co.uk/news/worldnews/northamerica/canada/9985196/Teenager-commits-suicide-after-photograph-of-her-being-gang-raped-goes-viral.html You can also find more information on what causes Cyberbullying here, goodtherapy.org/blog/teens-cyber-bullying-risk-factors-1025123 (this site is blocked by wikipedia which is why i didnt use the website link) --Jennifer mk (talk) 17:03, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

Nice Article. However examining more cases of cyber-bullying would be beneficial as the differences in how the public, law enforcement and the familial reactions would be different with each case. Some other cases of cyber-bullying are Tyler Clementi: http://www.theguardian.com/world/2010/sep/30/tyler-clementi-gay-student-suicide and Megan Meier: http://www.crimelibrary.com/criminal_mind/psychology/megan_meier/01.html — Preceding unsigned comment added by S.cham91 (talk • contribs) 17:12, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

I really liked your article. Maybe you could talk about how to prevent cyber bullying. Here are some cites. http://www.tandfonline.com/doi/abs/10.3200/TCHS.81.1.8-12#.VD1aA6Nzazk http://eric.ed.gov/?id=EJ930761 --ErinComm (talk) 17:18, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

Interesting article, you chose an incredibly important topic as it is very relevant within our society and one that needs to be addressed by everyone. To add to your article, here is a link that talks about the ways in which we can help to prevent cyber bullying, http://www.stopbullying.gov/cyberbullying/prevention/. Another link that can help you to expand on your topic is http://kidshealth.org/parent/positive/talk/cyberbullying.html, which addresses how to deal with cyber bullying if it does occur. --PaigeMini (talk) 17:36, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

This was a well written article on a major issue we are having today. As mentioned by other editors, your article did not really focus on preventative measures on how to combat cyber bullying. Cyber bullying has changed the entire form of bullying from kids being bullied in schools and now with technology advancing, more resources are available for criminals to bully people online. We have to find ways of protecting kids by monitoring who they meet online and use the technology to catch those predators. It is also important to note that many of the bullies are same aged kids within their schools who bully the other kids from their schools.

Here are some articles involving cyber bullying:

http://mashable.com/2014/07/13/cyberbullying-stalking-leander-texas/ http://abcnews.go.com/US/teen-charged-fatal-cyberbullying-case-rebecca-sedwick-remain/story?id=20580689 --Naveed24 (talk) 17:44, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

This is an interesting and timely topic and well put together article. Given the wealth of information surrounding the issue of cyber-bullying and the given word constrains, you did an excellent job and there is nothing i would have done differently. I have to wonder though, isnt it cyber bulling when hackers take nude photos of celebrities or regular folks and plaster the internet with them? Just wondering... — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mispace101 (talk • contribs) 18:08, 17 October 2014 (UTC)

Reading over this, you made some great points. Especially in the Amanda case you provided. I believe a great addition to this would be to add in history of cyberbullying. To go back and analyze how it began and the growth of it. It would then also better explain your effects of cyberbullying better. http://www.timetoast.com/timelines/the-history-of-cyberbullying and http://nobullying.com/a-history-of-bullying-in-the-uk/ Foram shukla (talk) 21:42, 18 October 2014 (UTC)

This is a relevant issue! Here is an article on the rise of cyberbullying written from a Canadian perspective. http://www.canada.com/life/Cyber+bullying+rise/2915031/story.html

15:44, 20 October 2014 (UTC)Alexwism (talk)

Hey, great article! You did a great job in exploring different subtopics regarding cyberbullying also it was very effective to incorporate the story on Amanda. Here is a website regarding cyberbullying effects http://fundforcivility.org/cyberbullying-effects/ and here is another website regarding cyberbullying in school and how teachers and staff inside school could identify it. http://www.scholastic.com/teachers/article/cyberbullying-what-teachers-and-schools-can-do --Rabirami (talk) 21:29, 20 October 2014 (UTC)

Hi, your article was really informative. A way you could expand on your article would be to talk about how more people are bringing awareness to cyberbullying. Here are some articles to expand on that http://nobullying.com/modern-day-cyberbullying-awareness-consequences-and-prevention/ and http://deletecyberbullying.eu/ --Kshawww (talk) 13:57, 21 October 2014 (UTC)

Great Topic, it was very interesting and informative. Here are some websites related to cyberbullying: http://stopcyberbullying.org/why_do_kids_cyberbully_each_other.html and http://mediasmarts.ca/backgrounder/cyberbullying-law-fact-sheet --Usha1960 (talk) 15:44, 21 October 2014 (UTC)

Great article, and i like how you illustrated the effects on cyberbullying and briefly expanded on them. here is an article that can provide some additional information to your article on the methods on stoping cyberbullying that you may add in the future http://stopcyberbullying.org/index2.html. — Preceding unsigned comment added by FrankDonkor21 (talk • contribs) 23:51, 21 October 2014 (UTC)

Hello, i enjoyed your article however i would have like to seen some info on how to prevent cyberbullying from happening this source may help. http://www.stopbullying.gov/cyberbullying/prevention/ — Preceding unsigned comment added by SeanWk12 (talk • contribs) 05:27, 22 October 2014 (UTC)

Hi, this is a really interesting topic. It was well written. I have found some cites you might want to look at to add to you topic. Here are 2 cites that i found that you may want to use. http://www.prevnet.ca/bullying/cyber-bullying http://mediasmarts.ca/cyberbullying/strategies-fighting-cyberbullying Yalini47 (talk) 17:25, 22 October 2014 (UTC)

I found reading your article very informative and feel this topic is a rising concern for our society and needs to be thoroughly addressed. As for your article I feel there are a few components that you can add to strengthen it. One major way you can improve this article is to discuss the victim components of cyber-bullying. By adding the components of the victim that the bully searches for it better informs the readers so they can prevent themselves from becoming cyber-victims. You can find this information in Hannah Scotts book "Victimology". In this she suggest various aspects of the victim as well as the prevalence of the rising issue. Another way you can reinforce your information could be by adding techniques for avoiding cyber-bullying as well as counseling victims of cyberbullying. This would be important for parents who are trying to help out their children without actually putting them through counseling. This information could be located through our school library within a book called "Cyber-bullying: what counselors need to know" by Sheri Bauman. By adding this information your article will be more diverse and able to cater to all components of cyber-bullying.--DonkoC88 (talk) 18:06, 11 November 2014 (UTC)