User talk:KhajadaNeal/Why The Future Doesn't Need Us/Vada.amerson Peer Review

Hello, I added my peer review on your sandbox, and I have to say that the draft of the article looks good to start, however I think with added content to secondary sources, it could be much more longer and more easy to read. I think you are off to a good start. Vada.amerson (talk) 21:29, 3 November 2019 (UTC)