User talk:Khanalei

Your submission at Articles for creation: Kona Airport Police (July 9)
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Zoozaz1 (talk) 04:19, 9 July 2020 (UTC)

Hawaii Department of Public Safety
Hi, I've reverted your edit to Hawaii Department of Public Safety because it seems to be giving undue weight to this story. Specifically, while I agree with you that this controversy is significant enough to be mentioned in this article, I strongly believe that the amount of detail your edit added in (with names, lengths of service, etc.) is way too much detail for an article giving an overview of the department. Please open a discussion on the talk page if you disagree with my revert. Thank you. Aoi (青い) (talk) 08:38, 9 July 2020 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Kona Airport Police


Hello, Khanalei. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Kona Airport Police".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz Read! Talk! 04:19, 9 January 2021 (UTC)