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ICCH224 Week 01
--Teetee taw (talk) 14:09, 14 September 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Teetee taw (talk) 13:50, 21 September 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 02
--Teetee taw (talk) 13:50, 21 September 2019 (UTC)

Task 1: -An example of student edit on the article Special:Diff/726039144 -A warning message that the student received on his/her talk page Special:Diff/829456350

Task 2: -An example of student edits on an article Special:Diff/636831004/634705830 -Warning that the student received on his/her talk page Special:Diff/636835165/636805545

Task 3: -An example of a student who has been warned on talk page Special:Diff/787084283/783422527 -An example where copyrighted is deleted from Wikimedia Commons and removed from an article Special:Diff/786345747/prev

Khanyat2000 (talk) 15:20, 27 September 2019 (UTC)


 * ✅ Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Taweetham (talk) 10:00, 29 September 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 03
--Taweetham (talk) 10:00, 29 September 2019 (UTC)

— Preceding unsigned comment added by Khanyat2000 (talk • contribs) 15:09, 1 October 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) My Proposed Article : Black snake (firework)
 * 2) * This article already exist but lack of information. This article only contain the description of the experiment.
 * 3) * I believe that I can add more appropriate information.
 * 4) Brief outline of your contributions to the article
 * 5) * I plan to add another two parts which are experiment(how to do the experiment) and chemistry of experiment(add the chemical reaction and explain).
 * 6) * references :
 * 7) ** https://www.jstor.org/topic/sodium-bicarbonate/?refreqid=search%3Ac2b2b99a274a753dbcb8b8c638c56bdc
 * 8) ** https://www.thoughtco.com/make-black-snakes-or-glow-worms-605964
 * 9) ** https://edu.rsc.org/download?ac=12358
 * 10) Examples/template/related articles
 * 11) * Miller–Urey_experiment
 * 12) * Glycerol and potassium permanganate
 * ✅ Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Taweetham (talk) 08:45, 6 October 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 04
--Taweetham (talk) 08:45, 6 October 2019 (UTC)
 * "How to" may be considered WP:NOT. Please make sure that you find way to do a positive addition to the article. --Taweetham (talk) 10:31, 8 October 2019 (UTC)
 * Please see if cite news or cite web is more appropriate. You should not repeatedly do the full citation for the same reference and, as a result, make the reference list longer.  Rather, name the reference and call it by that name in later citation. I did one example for you. --Taweetham (talk) 15:18, 12 October 2019 (UTC)


 * ✅ Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Taweetham (talk) 15:19, 12 October 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 05
--Taweetham (talk) 15:19, 12 October 2019 (UTC)
 * It took some time to reformat your work.   Please study these changes carefully before you add further content to the article.  Can you add book references to the article?  We probably have a few good books in the library on the topic. --Taweetham (talk) 01:34, 20 October 2019 (UTC)


 * Please pay attention to WP:NOT as I have previously mentioned to you. Some of you content has now been removed.  You can see the page history for more specific comments. --Taweetham (talk) 05:30, 27 October 2019 (UTC)

I tried my best to find my topic in the book already but I cannot find any relevant information relating to the experiment so I did find some more informations on other websites ka. I have added more information in the Chemistry of experiment section and add another section about explanation, please check in my sandbox ka Ajarn.Khanyat2000 (talk) 14:40, 28 October 2019 (UTC)


 * ✅ Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Taweetham (talk) 05:17, 27 October 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 07
For your information, the grading is based on the criteria below: --Taweetham (talk) 05:17, 27 October 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 08
Hi Khanyat2000! This is an impression of a full reading of the article Black snake (firework). I am confused by inconsistency and lack of connection in the article. --Taweetham (talk) 06:30, 3 November 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) What is the difference or what is the definition of Black snake and sugar snake?  How are they related to the "Sodium bicarbonate version" and "	Mercury(II) thiocyanate version"? I made revisions to subsection names to my understanding.  Please see if this is correct.  However, the difference of sugar snake and carbon snake is still probably needed in the sugar snake section.
 * 2) Why are similar subsections called "Chemistry" and "Experiment"?  Please check with a good example and WP:MOS.
 * 3) Wikipedia is not for how to information.  However, as the article stands, I believe that some information may be missing as to the setting of the experiment.  I remember that sands are needed for sugar snake.  Why?  Is that necessary?
 * 4) I think we agreed on some other references to be included in your article.  I just added it in and relocated content from Mercury(II) thiocyanate.
 * 5) We can now think about media production (VDO/picture) for this article.

ICCH224 Week 08
Hi Khanyat2000! Are we settled on the content or you wish to add anything further? --Taweetham (talk) 02:00, 15 November 2019 (UTC)

I think I am settled and will not add anything more ka. Khanyat2000 (talk) 15:06, 15 November 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 10
You are now assigned a mentor. --Taweetham (talk) 06:23, 16 November 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 11
Your mentor will provide detailed feedback in the next few days. I have identified a number of problems at this point: --Taweetham (talk) 08:32, 23 November 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) After I reorganized the article, you contribution has fallen below 3,000 bytes.  Please see if you can add anything else to the text.
 * 2) Please make sure that your language is encyclopedic and academic.  For example, the sentence "The carbon is what makes the snake black." can propably br rewritten.
 * --Taweetham (talk) 08:36, 25 November 2019 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the spectacular photo.

--Taweetham (talk) 02:00, 26 November 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) Can you add category on Commons for all of your uploads? (for better re-use of the materials)
 * 2) Can you overwrite (upload a new version of) the File:Result_of_black_snake_experiment.jpg with a full resolution photo? (for better re-use of the materials)
 * 3) Can you upload and add a video as well?
 * 4) Can you specify that ratio is 4:1 by mass and specify how much ethanol is used?

I add more pictures and video already ka. Khanyat2000 (talk) 02:04, 26 November 2019 (UTC)
 * Can you upload the original video as well? It think we can create a new category on commons for this. --Taweetham (talk) 17:05, 27 November 2019 (UTC)

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October 2019
Hello. Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia.

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Please use the edit summary to explain your reasoning for the edit, or a summary of what the edit changes. You can give yourself a reminder to add an edit summary by setting. I know this is mentioned in the training and guidelines materials that were given to you as part of your project. DMacks (talk) 08:14, 26 October 2019 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the information, I will do it next time.Khanyat2000 (talk) 15:13, 28 October 2019 (UTC)