User talk:Khewison

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Richard Robison (October 24)
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Greenman (talk) 10:19, 24 October 2022 (UTC)

advice
Per WP:MOS - external links are not included in text of articles - and the citations WP:CITE are required to be inside appropriate framing - and WP:RS are where reviews of work are better than links to works -

and works themselves -

take care - as it is the draft wont go anywhere - unlinked citations and open urls are red rags to a reviewer...

ultimately always better to reverse engineer an article of a member of the cohort: -


 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Harold_Crouch

the article about yourself has most of the problems I have covered above - there are external links in the text, and so on...

JarrahTree 14:30, 24 October 2022 (UTC)


 * Thanks for all your advice JarrahTree. Stick with me as I slowly work through this, redrafting it. This is all new for me, being the first article I have ever written and learning all the Wikipedia acronyms and rules is challenging. I will try to follow the Harold Crouch article. Khewison (talk) 23:53, 24 October 2022 (UTC)


 * Slowly does it - try looking at others sort of related but different
 * M._C._Ricklefs has lots of mistakes as an article


 * Benedict_Anderson has mistakes but it is big to wade through


 * Ruth_McVey smaller but closer to the crouch article

It's a fickle road to travel, a bit like fieldwork/research in Indonesia, (many other comments come to mind, but...) JarrahTree 01:12, 25 October 2022 (UTC)


 * Am I getting closer with my recent edits? I'm not sure what else I can do.... But welcome suggestions. Robison's early life is almost impossible to track down online, but the details have been confirmed with him. Khewison (talk) 02:19, 17 December 2022 (UTC)


 * Nope nowhere near with all the ext links - read the top of this section very closely, again... JarrahTree 05:34, 18 December 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Richard Robison (February 26)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by CNMall41 was:

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CNMall41 (talk) 09:30, 26 February 2023 (UTC)

this is all very circular
It looks like a real life interaction over a coffee at Murdoch some time - and I could walk you through the issues, and it might unlock the problems for once and all - this is like watching paint dry as it is.

If you are interested - give me week's notice, and we should meet up somewhere where the airconditioning is nothing less than refrigeration level on Murdoch campus. You can email me if you wish. Otherwise we will find this in the same condition in 2025 or something. JarrahTree 10:40, 26 February 2023 (UTC)


 * Thank you for this offer. A problem is that I have no affiliation with Murdoch University. If Murdoch is your location, I could com there some time. Khewison (talk) 11:29, 26 February 2023 (UTC)


 * My apology - my misunderstanding - state reference library a better reference point? JarrahTree 11:35, 26 February 2023 (UTC)
 * Let me have another stab at it, based on the last rejection comments. I'll then be in touch. Khewison (talk) 03:13, 27 February 2023 (UTC)

Concern regarding Draft:Richard Robison
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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 04:02, 15 August 2023 (UTC)