User talk:Khinems/sandbox

--Sweiner02 (talk) 21:00, 26 November 2017 (UTC)
 * No heading needed for abstract.
 * Bold the disease name
 * Even in immuno-compromised patients, this is an infection. The way you describe it sounds like it's not.
 * I feel like you're changing original text to make it different, not because it needs it. It is GOOD to use whatever text from the original article is reasonable. It's fine to change it, but only do so if there's a clear benefit in clarity or additional information. Many of your changes decrease clarity.
 * Needs links to other pages and citations.
 * How does the invading organism cause the lesions? Mechanism needs some fleshing out.
 * Lay accessible: All technical terms should be linked, defined or avoided.
 * Use wikipedia formatting tools!
 * Citation is particularly important for Recent research. Make sure to clarify what the key findings are. Also, there's some really good recent stuff that's not included here.