User talk:Khoamac/sandbox

Hi Khoam,

Your article choice looks really cool. I am looking forward to your edits.

Nadia Nadiabozhduga (talk) 00:27, 15 July 2018 (UTC)

Draft feedback
Hi Khoa!

I just read your current draft for the "Operation Golden Dragon" article. You're finding a nice range of sources and what you've added so far definitely improves the article.

My biggest suggestions as you continue adding to and revising this draft are: --is there any more information you can find (or have already found) about the length of this exercise, the kinds of ships the ships listed as involved in the exercise are/were, the kinds of training this involved for South Korean troops, etc.? Was there an imminent threat from North Korea or Japan, or was this training not driven by a specific immediate concern? Any more detail you can add would be beneficial. --for the references, you will want more than just the URL (see one of the featured Wikipedia articles or review the training about citations in Wikipedia to see what they should include), and you will want to cite directly in the text where you are using each reference

I hope these help a little as you continue to improve this article, and I look forward to seeing what you add to it! Nicoleccc (talk) 01:20, 28 July 2018 (UTC)

Khoa's Peer Review
Hello Khoa! I thought your topic was interesting immediately after your first sentence about what it is. I didn't expect your topic to be connected with military training. I can see that you don't have a lot of information gathered yet. I have some questions that you may look for while researching: Whose idea was it to make this exercise? Was it helpful to the soldiers? How was it helpful? How is it different from the other military trainings? Is it still used/ performed until today? Also, you should put pictures to see what/how the training looks like. I'm excited to read your article once its finished. Good Luck! :) Encinas.geralene (talk) 08:01, 31 July 2018 (UTC)Geralene Encinas

Nadia's Peer Review
Hi there,

Your article looks very good. Clear and to the point. I dont have any suggestions. Except maybe a little more information of what exactly this operation did/ purpose for it. Otherwise you did great. Nadiabozhduga (talk) 00:17, 1 August 2018 (UTC)Nadia