User talk:Khollman88

Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you? The Article that I chose was the Children's Crusade. The only pertinent information that I felt was missing was, the crusade wasn't necessarily a crusade, because Pope Innocents III never recognized it. It was mainly an unorganized collaboration of individuals that came together for a common goal.Khollman88 (talk) 03:20, 6 November 2017 (UTC)Khollman88

Article Evaluation for "Children's Crusade"

While working on his father farm in 1212, Stephan of Cloyes was said to have been visited by a man claiming to be Jesus. The man told Stephan of Cloyes to gather thousands of children, and to lead them to the holy land. Stephan of Cloyes actually believe the man and launch the second children's crusade. Khollman88 (talk) 02:30, 25 November 2017 (UTC)Khollman88