User talk:Khosein4/sandbox

Avoid editorializing “it is imperative that..” as this is essay-style rather than Wiki-style writing. Overall, some good ideas but the organization of your content is poor. Think about how to segregate the content into subsections and focus on one or two subsections in detail. I was expecting the article to dig into the details of TEM, as per the title, but it’s more of a general overview on some issues that lead to pilot error. You really need to focus/narrow your topic to create a good Wiki article. Only about ½ of the sources are peer reviewed journals. The others are books and conference proceedings. Remove links as many are dead and not helpful. Good effort but there is more work to do. Skearns4 (talk) 17:39, 27 October 2015 (UTC)