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Article Evaluation
The article I have chosen is Artisanal Fishing. As this article is only two paragraphs long I know that there is a lot more that can be added. What I plan on doing is finding more references on artisanal fishing, the techniques used and the gear used and further explain them in different sections.

There a many photos already in the article which I will use to elaborate on the fishing gear and techniques used in artisanal fishing. I think have words to explain the photos will be very helpful in this wikipedia page as just having the photos of the techinques and gear does not explain how or why it is used.

The article is neutral, and does cite appropriately. Therefore, the main downfall in this article is that it is lacking in information, and that is what I plan to add to it.

Potential Sources

Whitty, T. "Artisanal Fisheries Impacts". Ocean Scientists for Informed Policy. Retrieved 31 March 2018.

Allison, Edward; Ellis, Frank (September 2001). "The livelihoods approach and management of small-scale fisheries". Marine Policy. 25 (5): 377-388. doi:https://doi.org/10.1016/S0308-597X(01)00023-9

— Preceding unsigned comment added by Khs52 (talk • contribs) 03:16, 30 March 2018 (UTC)

Importance of Artisanal Fisheries
A main thing I want to add to this article is why artisanal fisheries are important. I think that since this article is, as of right now, only defining what artisanal fisheries are, that is all that people are gong to take away from the article. I think that by further defining not only the techniques and gear that are used but also showing how artisanal fisheries impact our world, readers will understand more. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Khs52 (talk • contribs) 00:45, 31 March 2018 (UTC)