User talk:Khushjawandha/sandbox

Perspectives and Methodology
In the opening statement, the phrase "Some argue that spiritual beings..." It could better to specify the specific group within the reference source from which this opinion comes from. This distinction is later made when talking about "healthcare providers" specifically, but not in the first section.

Education section
Within the section, the U.S., Canada, and Europe are mentioned as areas that have incorporated Bioethics as part of the university/medical school curriculum. It would be interesting to explore the role Bioethics plays in a classroom and residency setting in developing countries, in order to draw parallels and differences with those of the developed world. This could lead to more people visiting the "Bioethics Wiki page" to better understand the importance of the ethics behind medical decision making and why it is absent/present in some parts of the world and not others.

General Suggestions
Although the article itself is covers a wide range of topics, you do a good job of choosing specific sections to cover and adding in details that add to the overall value of the article. Particularly, I thought your addition of the "Islamic Bioethics" subsection was insightful, educating me on a topic I was unfamiliar with and had never thought of with relation to Bioethics. I think this will be beneficial to teaching others who visit the page about the role of religion in medical decision making. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Marcmatossian (talk • contribs) 05:13, 9 April 2019 (UTC)