User talk:Khyejxxn/sandbox

Use external and internal linking -Link to other works he has done -Maybe a link to a youtube or tumblr wikipedia page -Link to his website or similar site

Add another section, maybe a background section

Remove the top level heading == Mark Slutsky == so that you have a Lead Paragraph. “Shorts” in the first sentence is not clear: I assume you mean short films? Add a section after the lead called “Biography” and tell use some details about his life. You then have the works section - those are pretty good. Add a final section called “Reception” or “Critical Response” where you discuss how people view Slutsky; use lots of references to sources - this will help establish notability. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 129.21.230.198 (talk) 19:28, 8 October 2015 (UTC)