User talk:Kieramalley/Student leader

Peer Review
Hi Kiera,

I have completed my peer review on your article "Student Leader." Kevinmount (talk) 14:53, 24 March 2024 (UTC)

Instructor Feedback
You are making some strong edits and additions to the article. Suggestions:

I’m not sure these statements are true of all student leaders and should probably be replaced with a more inclusive definition of student leadership: “A student leader is any student who takes on the responsibility of spreading knowledge through inspiration, tutoring, campaigns etc. A student leader strives to change the world by starting with their own community.”

[Are all student leaders spreading knowledge? Are they all motivated to change the world?]

I would move this section to Leader Development: “However, without proper guidance, their leadership may fall short or cease to grow upon graduation. In order to guide student leaders to success and efficiency, they need individualized mentoring as opposed to a broad leadership development approach.[1] Students who engage in more leader development and engagement have greater social awareness, self-control, and have greater chances of pursuing higher education.[2]”

I think adding some information about Leader in Me or checking out their definition of student leadership would be helpful:

https://www.leaderinme.org/what-is-leader-in-me/ Lndmayg (talk) 14:21, 6 April 2024 (UTC)