User talk:Kierankeycrosby

Chew Lips Article
Hi Kieran, I've noticed that you've changed the Chew Lips article quite a lot from how it was before - the trouble is that now it doesn't read like an encyclopedia entry, more like a review. You can read Wikipedia's Manual of Style and Wikipedia's Content Guidelines for more info, or write on my talk page if you need a hand. Cheers Dylanfromthenorth (talk) 14:41, 10 June 2009 (UTC)


 * My mistake sorry, it looks like it was from an unregistered IP - 've put it back to how it was now anyhoo :-) Dylanfromthenorth (talk) 12:42, 11 June 2009 (UTC)


 * Hi Kieran,

The problem with the new introduction was that it wasn't encyclopedic - that is, it read more like a review than an encyclopedic entry. If you need any tips on Wikipedia's Manual of Style give me a shout (or I've linked to it above). With regards to images, if you click Upload file from the toolbox on the left of the screen you can add images there. You'll need to either give permission for use of the image or declare it as a "free image", whichever is appropriate, but again, if you want help with that gimme a shout.

Hope that helps Dylanfromthenorth (talk) 13:46, 23 June 2009 (UTC)