User talk:Kim D Warren

Your submission at Articles for creation: Asset-stock (May 17)
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&raquo; Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  15:24, 17 May 2018 (UTC)

Article declined response
The feedback is fair enough - I am used to essay-style writing. I will have to figure out how to change the style for acceptance. Can I ask if the final section on Recognition and Application is better? [may need a new heading, e.g. History?]Kim D Warren (talk) 15:41, 17 May 2018 (UTC)