User talk:Kim Fu

This user is a NEW user
This user is new. They are a university student who is trying to contribute to Wikipedia. They should be developing new content in their sandbox which is an addition in their own words and with references. I am willing to assist if this user needs help. Victuallers (talk) 21:30, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

Welcome!
Hello again Kim, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are a few links to pages you might find helpful:
 * Introduction and Getting started
 * Contributing to Wikipedia
 * The five pillars of Wikipedia
 * How to edit a page and How to develop articles
 * How to create your first article
 * Simplified Manual of Style

You may also want to take the Wikipedia Adventure, an interactive tour that will help you learn the basics of editing Wikipedia. You can visit The Teahouse to ask questions or seek help.

Please remember to sign your messages on talk pages by typing four tildes ( ~ ); this will automatically insert your username and the date. If you need help, check out Questions, ask me on my talk page, or, and a volunteer should respond shortly. Again, welcome! Victuallers (talk) 11:16, 26 March 2017 (UTC)

Feedback
I see that you got the comment "bad grammer, essay style writing. " on your work. I must encourage you to use the sandbox. This isnt a social media site. There are expectations - You added a lot of text in one go. Do copy this to your sandbox and address the problems identified. Roger Bamkin Victuallers (talk) 11:21, 10 May 2017 (UTC)