User talk:Kimannfran/Marie Louise Burgess-Ware/Madelynnmarshall Peer Review

Hi Kim! I really enjoyed reading your article on Marie Louise Burgess-Ware. You do a great job giving information on Burgess-Ware despite little being known about her. I liked how you elaborated within the "Known Works" section of the page because it provides a more detailed page even though the works aren't specific details of her life. By describing these works you have still provided details about Marie Louise Burgess-Ware because these works are apart of what she is remembered for. The one suggestion I have is under the "Life and Career" section you start by saying "Although little is known.." and then in the second sentence you say, "From the little that is known.." I would recommend deleting the start of the second sentence only because it is repetitive. Ultimately, the page looks great! Madelynnmarshall (talk) 16:31, 21 November 2020 (UTC)