User talk:Kimnasium/finalproject

Wow Kim! You have a lot of material to cover! I like the way you structured your outline! I feel like you have a great flow to it. I may have to steal your "notable examples" category. I always feel examples help cement and prove any points you make. I'm jealous of your ability to include photographs, I may have to try doing it myself. I plan on including a section on how bone and antler is prepared before being made into an object because the process is very interesting and very telling of what can go wrong. Maybe you could have a small section too. I'm sure there is plenty of information out there on how hides are prepared, although it could be very gross to read! Overall, I think you have a great outline and look forward to seeing your final article! - Andrea Abrahamsen

Kim, this is a great and thorough outline! You look at many different sources of fur (pelts, taxidermy, leather!) so I think it'd be great to make sure and include beyond definitions, what makes these differences important from the conservation point of view. I am also wondering if you're going to include anything about conserving fur that has been treated with hazardous chemicals? Just something to think about. Good job on the outline, and I can't wait to see the finished wiki article!Lani.odonnell (talk) 01:02, 18 April 2016 (UTC)