User talk:Kimyeseo1

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Peer Review
This article is headed in a good direction. Your lead section should have more details and provide a clearer explanation about the topic. This will set up the article better for you to continue writing about the background and views. You should make sure that everything you include in your lead section is mentioned later in the article; you include Idaenyo in the lead but do not include it again. The original article has a good structure that you effectively used to improve the content. I think you should consider adding some more sections and more details to existing sections. You should add some more images too. Most of the facts in the article are supported by numerical data, which is good for the article’s credibility. You should try to find more of this data to support your claims. However, you should also include citations for all of your information. There are some grammar and spelling faults that should be revised. It seems all viewpoints are well represented but you may want to include a section about opposition or backlash. This article feels slightly underdeveloped, but this can be fixed by incorporating more details and sections. I’m excited to see your final product! PepperMTC (talk) 04:27, 3 April 2023 (UTC)