User talk:Kimyeseo1/Idaenam/Sonalchuriwal Peer Review

Overall, this article has a lot of room for improvement and does not seem to have been edited much from the original article that is already published on Wikipedia. The article’s strength is the topic - it is a really unique topic that I imagine most people are not entirely familiar with. However, the article could be improved a lot by opening with a lead that allows the reader to better understand how idaeman originated and how it functions in the country today. Also, the last section about idaenam in South Korean politics could benefit from further explaining and contextualizing the examples because they are not concepts, politicians, etc. that people are widely familiar with. Overall, I would say the article is not entirely complete, and has room for further development.