User talk:King Mehar

April 2020

 * I have moved the draft you created to Draft:Tesla's retailing strategy. A Wikipedia talk page is for messages and discussions about work for the encyclopaedia, not for posting draft articles.
 * I'm afraid the draft is not at all suitable to become a Wikipedia article. It is clearly a personal essay, outlining your own thoughts and observations, whereas a Wikipedia article needs to be an objective account of facts recorded in reliable published sources. Expressions of opinion or point of view have no place in a Wikipedia article. Also, much of the content of the draft is unmistakably laudatory, which is contrary to Wikipedia's policy against promotional editing.
 * My advice to new editors is that it is best to start by making small improvements to existing articles, rather than creating new articles. That way any mistakes you make will be small ones, and you won't have the discouraging experience of repeatedly seeing hours of work deleted. Gradually, you will get to learn how Wikipedia works, and after a while you will know enough about what is acceptable to be able to write whole new articles without fear that they will be deleted. Over the years I have found that editors who start by making small changes to existing articles and work up from there have a far better chance of having a successful time here than those who jump right into creating new articles from the start. JBW (talk) 00:39, 30 April 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Tesla's retailing strategy (April 30)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by JBW were:

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JBW (talk) 00:41, 30 April 2020 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Tesla's retailing strategy


Hello, King Mehar. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Tesla's retailing strategy".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz Read! Talk! 02:06, 30 October 2020 (UTC)