User talk:Kingleothethird

Welcome!
Hello, Kingleothethird, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Feedback on your draft
Greetings ! When I did a pass through articles last time on the 16th, you didn't have text here. Now I see that you've added a bunch of material to User:Kingleothethird/Bumbershoot but it looks more like a list of changes that you intend to make not the text of the actual changes. Much of it is bullets, very little is in wikitext, etc. I explained (in the video I made for class that's in Panopto) how you can copy material over over to the sandbox.

I'm not really sure what to say at this point. It looks like your gather some good material and make some good contributions. I was hoping to have something like a finished text at this point that I could give you an thumbs-up or thumbs-down on but I can't really do that with the text in the current state.

Why don't you reach out to me on Discord and/or here and we can make a plan for how to get things back on track. Please do so right away. — m a k o ๛  18:38, 2 November 2020 (UTC)