User talk:Kinraid

In the article on 'The Talisman Ring' by Georgete Heyer there's a very good old cover, but the English could be improved '...Much to his crossness', etc. Why not use 'indignation'? The lack of objectivity in describing the characters - 'very romantic ' etc, give the impression of something written by a fan rather than Wicki. I was looking for something a bit more objective with some interesting criticism of the novel's flaws as well. Aren't there any? Haven't found any online myself, but I'm no expert.