User talk:KiondraMcGee/sandbox

Kiondra, I like the information you have built on your article. YOu will need to cite your resources for some of the statements you make--right now, if you have resources, they are not showing up. Also, your article could benefit from more structural organization: headings and sections. You are off to a good start. Psy430uk (talk) 19:53, 17 April 2012 (UTC)

I do not see any of your resources. It was interesting to read about Pillow talk. and you did well establish the explanation of your topic on first paragraph. I wish there are more articles to support the idea of increasing of Oxytocin during sexual arousal. I think that you might want to research on positive effect of Pillow talk, such as improving the relationship with partner or stress relief, etc. Overall, i was very enjoying reading your topic and i want to know more about Pillow talk int he future. Thank you! suejung89 (talk) 15:09, 19 April 2012.