User talk:Kipet15/sandbox

http://lantern.mediahist.org/catalog/motionpicturemag08moti_0767 Check out a few of the articles on this website if you haven't- this is a great article so far, maybe you could find something obscure details? Cbazinet (talk) 18:12, 30 November 2014 (UTC)

The article is definitely awesome so far. You've got lots of good details, personal and professional. It may benefit from going into the specifics of the projects she worked on more (I thought it was really interesting how you mentioned her androgynous appearance, maybe go into what that meant for her/what types of characters she played, if they're related?). I know the archives on the class moodle page sent me to a lot of criticism from the time of the films' release, which helped put together a picture of what my actor's roles were typically like. Kdangelo (talk) 00:20, 1 December 2014 (UTC)