User talk:Kirstenb2/Hattie McDaniel

Very good work! Maybe consider changing "The table that Hattie McDaniel was forced to sit at" to "The table at which Hattie McDaniel was forced to sit", to avoid ending a clause with a preposition. The facts are very interesting, but it might help if you put the surrounding text (from the actual article) into the sandbox for context. HighQueenErin (talk) 02:30, 25 April 2020 (UTC)HighQueenErin