User talk:Kitkatthy/sandbox

Please use full sentences. Expand to discuss what the archaeologists found during excavations.Profarch (talk) 17:55, 16 March 2018 (UTC)

The article seems somewhat short. Try finding more articles and elaborating on what sort of artifacts and features have been found there.Tsulkalu (talk) 23:17, 21 March 2018 (UTC)Tsulkalu

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As far as I can tell, you only have one source listed so try to find more sources on your site, which will also help you expand on it as well because your entry seems rather short. You can try the encyclopedia of excavated sites in India (not sure of the exact title), but it was helpful to me. Also, you could discuss what types of things were found at the site, such as the type of pottery. I know you have the era of the sites occupation, but maybe you could talk about what else was going on during this time period and what the people were like who occupied it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Echoarchaeo (talk • contribs) 16:50, 22 March 2018 (UTC)