User talk:Kittyra/sandbox

JordanUTM93 (talk) 23:49, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

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Hiiiii Mae.llazarte (talk) 01:38, 21 March 2012 (UTC)

Hey guys, so when we edit the Walt Disney page, we have to print screen every thing we've edited/added before posting it, right? JordanUTM93 (talk) 00:20, 23 March 2012 (UTC)

ya i'm assuming but she did say keep an eye out for an announcement for another option Kittyra (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 00:27, 23 March 2012 (UTC).

So Walt Disney it is ! :) Mae.llazarte (talk) 01:41, 21 March 2012 (UTC)

Yes Walt Disney I suppose Kittyra (talk)

Ok so What shall we edit a paragraph or like the WHOLE PAGE Kittyra (talk)

Well as you have seen it is very well done. Where should we start? Mae.llazarte (talk) 01:51, 21 March 2012 (UTC)

Should we make our own page then? JordanUTM93 (talk) 01:54, 21 March 2012 (UTC)

Were we supposed to do that from the start or something? cause i never heard about this :O JordanUTM93 (talk) 23:18, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

Cause if we make our own page, then it wouldn't be so hard to edit the very well done work of others lol JordanUTM93 (talk) 01:55, 21 March 2012 (UTC)

Are we allowed to create a new page of a page that already exists? Mae.llazarte (talk) 01:56, 21 March 2012 (UTC)

Its your call guys im down to do whats good for the groupKittyra (talk)

what would you do if you made a page? do you guys have any ideas of what your going to be putting up on the page?--AshokeMano (talk) 02:11, 21 March 2012 (UTC)

Okay, well I was reading the Walt's talk page, and it looks like there's a history of deletions on his page... Mae.llazarte (talk) 02:09, 23 March 2012 (UTC)

Hey guys, i was looking on the Walt Disney page and there was only like 1 or 2 sentences on Walt Disney's childern history. If we can do some research and expand on this, i think this would be a suitable paragraph for us to create. Or, we could add more information about Disney's other main characters (besides Mickey Mouse) like Goofy or Minny Mouse. WE NEED TO DECIDE ON SOMETHING TO EDIT BEFORE IT GETS TOO LATE!!! JordanUTM93 (talk) 02:50, 24 March 2012 (UTC)

I think we should write a paragraph about Walt Disney's children, since there is only 1 sentence about it in Walt Disney Wikipedia page. I found one site about his biography and it also includes some relevant sources at the bottom of the page where it says "FOR MORE INFORMATION" JordanUTM93 (talk) 17:37, 25 March 2012 (UTC) I think talking about his childhood is a good idea! im gonna do some research tonight and we'll take it from there! btw where's the other guy whos in our group? Kittyra (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 22:52, 25 March 2012 (UTC).

Ok So I Was looking at Diane MArie Disney there really isnt alot of information on her shes in her 70's she also founded the walt disney family museum. it is abit hard to find indepth information but we only need a paragraph right? Kittyra (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 03:30, 26 March 2012 (UTC).

Yeah,we only need to complete one paragraph!!! JordanUTM93 (talk) 22:18, 26 March 2012 (UTC)


 * Hey guys. I found some links concerning the whereabouts of the two Disney daughters today. [|Link]. This is probably good information we can put in the article. PhilippedeJocas (talk) 16:14, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

Yeah Philippe, good idea. We definetly should also focus on what his daughters are currently doing today. Also, i found a more in depth description of his children from the beginning. Check out this link and look for the section called "Disney and his Family" JordanUTM93 (talk) 22:19, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

I was looking into diane i found a couple things aboput her invvolvement in the Disney family museum in florida Kittyra (talk)

Alright, so our paragraph should begin obviously with the Disney's kids' birthday date and how one was adopted, which i thought i read. Then we should talk about how they grew up, like what university/college they went to, what job they have currently, how old they are, and where they currently live JordanUTM93 (talk) 23:03, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

True i agree with jordan i was mainly focusing on Diane there isnt alot of data but i will try and look into it further, shes really into preserving her fathers image Kittyra (talk)

okay, sounds goodMae.llazarte (talk) 23:09, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

I just realized there is another wikipedia page specifically on his 2 kids and we could research the references used to create that page JordanUTM93 (talk) 23:11, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

Oh, you guys we forgot to put the UTM Education banner up on the Disney's talk page!!!!! Mae.llazarte (talk) 23:13, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

I was also looking through the things that were listed as needing to be updated on the Walt Disney page, and it said that some edits might be needed on certain things... you guys should take a look at his talk page. Mae.llazarte (talk) 23:14, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

True and how do we put up the banner??? Kittyra (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 23:15, 26 March 2012 (UTC).

There are some citations needed on the page; we could probably do that while we're at it. PhilippedeJocas (talk) 23:17, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

so basically you guys want to do just the paragraphs for the two daughters? and find more information on it? i can get to doing some research about it if thats what we are doing--AshokeMano (talk) 23:19, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

That's exactly what we're writing on Ashoke. Try to find info if you can JordanUTM93 (talk) 23:23, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

Ok, so just to get us organized for this paragraph we're going to write, i'll make a numbered list of what info we need (in order): (1) Children birth date (2) Explain how one of them was adopted (3) What school both went to (if any and if we can find that info) (4) Where they currently live (5) What Jobs they currently have JordanUTM93 (talk) 23:24, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

I was looking at the Walt Disney wiki page and since we are talking about both daughters.. we could include some things about his wife Lillian Bounds too since there isn't much information about her?--AshokeMano (talk) 23:25, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

Ashoke, lets just focus on his kids for now. We only need to do one paragraph and it would be more work to search up his wife JordanUTM93 (talk) 23:31, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

Ill try to find the where they are now stuffKittyra (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 23:27, 26 March 2012 (UTC).

Okay so I added the panner to walt disney's page under 1.6 children headline Mae.llazarte (talk) 23:32, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

Alright just suggesting things we can do.. but I will go on and try to find some info on the two girls !--AshokeMano (talk) 23:32, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

FYI guys, i just realized Diane Disney is married to Ron W. Miller and her actual name is now Diane Miller. Here is a link to the winery they now own which we could mention in the paragraph JordanUTM93 (talk) 23:34, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

Oh, you guys... his page is semi protected and in order for us to make edits... well here's what it is saying: "Semi-protection

Policy shortcuts: WP:SEMI WP:SILVERLOCK See also: Wikipedia:Rough guide to semi-protection Semi-protection prevents edits from unregistered users (IP addresses), as well as edits from any account that is not autoconfirmed (is at least four days old and has at least ten edits to Wikipedia) or confirmed. Such users can request edits to a semi-protected page by proposing them on its talk page, using the template if necessary to gain attention. If the page in question and its talk page are both protected please make your edit request at Wikipedia:Request for edit instead. New users may also request the confirmed user right by visiting Requests for permissions." Mae.llazarte (talk) 23:37, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

kay, what does this mean?? JordanUTM93 (talk) 23:39, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

Well when I tried putting in the banner, it didn't show up... so I guess this comes into play : "Semi-protection prevents edits from unregistered users (IP addresses), as well as edits from any account that is not autoconfirmed (is at least four days old and has at least ten edits to Wikipedia) or confirmed." Mae.llazarte (talk) 23:40, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

So basically, we can't even do an edit for the Disney page just because we're new to wiki? JordanUTM93 (talk) 23:42, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

Maybe we should confirm with Philippe, because he has edited on wikipedia before... Mae.llazarte (talk) 23:47, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

hey guys, i just put a semi-protection thing on our talk page just now. It's at the top of the page if you're wondering JordanUTM93 (talk) 23:50, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

oh, you know what... you can make edits. It's just that the banner won't show up... but text will. Mae.llazarte (talk) 23:51, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

Well, as long as we change the text, that's ok then, right? JordanUTM93 (talk) 23:54, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, I suppose. Mae.llazarte (talk) 23:55, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

Ok guys, lets start creating the paragraph we'll put on the Disney page then about his kids JordanUTM93 (talk) 00:03, 27 March 2012 (UTC) Just looked at some history of Dianne Miller. She married at the age of 20 to football star Ron Miller. She had interests in becoming a journalist but it never came through for her. Here is the link to a interview that she was involved in : http://www.telegraph.co.uk/culture/film/starsandstories/8126800/Diane-Disney-Miller-interview.html --AshokeMano (talk) 00:05, 27 March 2012 (UTC)

Alright, great!! I think we've got enough info now so we should start on the actual paragraph JordanUTM93 (talk) 00:15, 27 March 2012 (UTC) Looking Good Everyone! I think were set it's not overtly detailed but it has just the right amount of information for wikipedia Kittyra (talk)

GUYS, WRITE DOWN BELOW THIS SOMETHING TO ADD FOR THE PARAGRAPH WE WILL WRITE AND THEN WE WILL COMBINE IT ALL TOGETHER: JordanUTM93 (talk) 00:15, 27 March 2012 (UTC)

(use dash marks before you put something on) AND ALSO GUYS, DON'T FORGET TO CITE YOUR FACTS WITH A REFERENCE FROM WHERE YOU GOT IT FROM. IF YOU ALREADY ADDED, JUST ADD A REFERENCE TO WHAT YOU WROTE :)JordanUTM93 (talk) 00:30, 27 March 2012 (UTC)

- Diane Disney is now married to Ron W. Miller and is now Diane Miller JordanUTM93 (talk) 00:17, 27 March 2012 (UTC)

- Diane and her husband now own a winery called "Silverado Vineyards" JordanUTM93 (talk) 00:20, 27 March 2012 (UTC)

- Sharon Disney was born December 31, 1936 in L.A California, USA JordanUTM93 (talk) 00:41, 27 March 2012 (UTC)

- Sharon Disney stared as herself in "One hour in Wonderland" from Disney pictures JordanUTM93 (talk) 00:47, 27 March 2012 (UTC)

- At 22, Sharon married Robert Brown until his death in 1967. Both had 1 child together. Sharon later married William Lund and had 2 children. Sharon and William divorced sometime later. JordanUTM93 (talk) 00:51, 27 March 2012 (UTC)

- Sharon, Walt's adopted daughter died, due to cancer, in 1993 and had 3 children-- Mae.llazarte (talk) 00:21, 27 March 2012 (UTC)

- Sharon was adopted in January of 1937, supposedly due to Lillian's many miscarriages -- http://wdwcentral.wordpress.com/2008/12/01/the-windows-on-main-street-sharon-lund/. Mae.llazarte (talk) 05:17, 27 March 2012 (UTC)

- After Sharon's death, $11 million dollars from her trust was donated to the California School of Performing Arts, which initiated the development of the Sharon D. Lund School of Dance.-- http://wdwcentral.wordpress.com/2008/12/01/the-windows-on-main-street-sharon-lund/ Mae.llazarte (talk) 05:17, 27 March 2012 (UTC)

- Sharon's kids were named Michelle and Brad. They were twins. Sharon and her husband Bill were involved in an argument involving the trust funds of her kids. Bill misused the trust fund and was involved in secret land deals. He made a profit off what he did.--AshokeMano (talk) 00:25, 27 March 2012 (UTC)

- Diane Disney started the museum in order to preserve his good image and to reach out to "the millions of people who kinda love him" and "The museum opened two years ago and presents a chronological view of Walt Disney's life from birth to death through artifacts, interactive kiosks and animation". Mae.llazarte (talk) 00:32, 27 March 2012 (UTC)

- Diane rarely speaks to the press; for the past 40 years she’s lived in relative obscurity in California’s Napa Valley Kittyra (talk)

- at 20 Diane married Ron Miller Kittyra (talk)

- Diane is secretary of the Walt disney finance companyKittyra (talk)

- Both of Disney's kids idolized him, and Diane was quoted "Daddy never missed a father's function no matter how I discounted it. I'd say, 'Oh, Daddy, you don't need to come. It's just some stupid thing.' But he'd always be there, on time." His children wanted to share, through the museum, that Walt Disney was more than just a brand, but a wonderful person as well. -- http://disneyheaven.com/waltdisney.htm Mae.llazarte (talk) 05:32, 27 March 2012 (UTC)

- Brad is developmentally disabled. PhilippedeJocas (talk) 12:57, 27 March 2012 (UTC)

- In 2009, Michelle suffered an aneurysm and moved to Arizona. PhilippedeJocas (talk) 12:57, 27 March 2012 (UTC)

- Diane Disney Miller had seven kids in total: Christopher, Joanna, Tamara, Jennifer, Walter, Ronald and Patrick. -- http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0228391/bio Mae.llazarte (talk) 23:44, 27 March 2012 (UTC)

- I can put an image in if we need. PhilippedeJocas (talk) 00:22, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

'''OK GUYS, SO HERE IS THE PARAGRAPH I HAVE CREATED OUT OF ALL OUR INFORMATION DOWN BELOW. EDIT AS YOU SEE NEEDED AND THEN WE WILL PASTE THE FINAL PRODUCT TO THE DISNEY PAGE:''' (I've put Diane and Sharon in 2 separate paragraphs so it does not go back in forth between the two in one paragraph)

If i did not include your fact in these 2 paragraphs, it was either not referenced, or was too out of context for the general info of Diane and Sharon JordanUTM93 (talk) 18:46, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

Paragraph
BEFORE YOU EDIT, DO NOT ADD A FACT WITHOUT GIVING A REFERENCE TO IT!!! JordanUTM93 (talk) 18:34, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

Walt and Lillian gave birth to their first daughter Diane Marie Disney on December 18, 1933. Diane married Ron Miller at the age of 20 and is known as Diane Disney Miller. The Millers had established and currently own a winery called Silverado Vineyards in California. Diane and Ron Miller had seven children in total: Christopher, Joanna, Tamara, Jennifer, Walter, Ronald and Patrick. Years later, Diane went on to become the co-founder of the Walt Disney Family Museum, with the aid of her children. The museum was created to preserve her father's image and reach out to millions of Disney fans worldwide. The museum displays a chronological view of Walt Disney's life through personal artifacts, interactive kiosks, and various animations. JordanUTM93 (talk) 17:23, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

Sharon Mae Disney was born December 31, 1936 in Los Angeles, California, but was later adopted by the Disneys, due to Lillian several birth complications. In 1950, Sharon went on to star as herself in the Walt Disney Studios special One Hour in Wonderland. In 1958, Sharon married Robert Brown whom she had one child with, until his death in 1967. Sharon later married William Lund in 1969 and had two children, but six years later they divorced. Sharon was a philanthropist and had contributed to charities such as the Marianne Frostig Center of Educational Therapy and the Curtis School foundation. In 1993 at the age of 57, Sharon died from cancer at St. John's Hospital in Santa Monica, California. After Sharon's death, a total of eleven million dollars was donated to the California School of Performing Arts, where she was a member of the board of trustees for almost two decades. Sharon's donation was commemorated by renaming the School of Dance the Sharon D. Lund School of Dance. JordanUTM93 (talk) 17:23, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

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