User talk:Kiwi Seratonin/sandbox/Portrait of Laura Dianti

Hi Christina,

It looks as though you put a lot of work into this! Your description of the portrait is good, but does not identify the figures until later in the paragraph. It would be helpful to read it first. In history, this sentence: "It then passed into the collections of Decio Azzolino, then (in 1686) of prince Odescalchi, then (in 1721) Philip of Orleans." doesn't make sense I read it without the parentheses. Include a little history about Alfonso L d'Este. Address Iconography section. In the identity of figures section, which art historians are claiming this? Identify the child and the importance of class and marriage. Links look good. Sources look good.

--Emily Harlow